hello my name is Richard Tyler an i will be discussing an Argument on gun violence today. first i will like to say that guns are not killing people, people are killing people. we can stop this if we can find a way to get the guns off the street an make sure that you can only parches a gun if you are on a job that u will need a gun for an u will still have to have a licences.
we are switchin class i will finish at lunch
Tuesday, April 22, 2008
Tuesday, April 15, 2008
friday work shop
hello mi name is Richard Tyler. In this essay i will be talking about what i learned on the work shops on Friday at Boys 2 Real Men. I will start this brief essay of by saying i learned allot at the work shops on Friday. I learned the real definition on how to be a real man 1 of the examples of this is someone who is not afraid to be there when his family needs him.
i dont have no more time in the library
i dont have no more time in the library
Friday, April 4, 2008
bb homework 4/4/08
My theme is drama. Both version of A Raisin In The Sun were excellent, I enjoyed both movie. The theme of the play to me was drama . I say drama because, Even though they went through allot of family problems, in the end they got along with one another. Both movies had drama in them. But over all the best one to me was the 2008 version.
The reason i say the 2008 version was better is because, one is was in color the 1961 version was in black and white. Prior to that there was celebrities in the movie that i see in new movies today. One thing that was better in the 1961 version was the acting. They played the character's better than the one in 2008.(because of p. diddy)
Allot of drama happened in these movies, there was one scene when Ruth was pregnant and was thinking about getting an abortion. There was also drama when Lena gave Walter all the money to put in the bank and he gave it to his friend to invest in a liquor Company and the guy ran off with it. Every one was upset with him and was bring him down. There was a scene when Lena told Beneatha you shouldn't just love someone when their at their highest, it's when their at their lowest when they need your love the most. That quote to me meant allot, if people act like that today then maybe every one wont be mad at each other and stop killing one another. (We are one all ways as a racist and we need to stick together because anther people are watching us kill each other).
The theme of these movies are relevant in 2008 because love and drama is what the world is made of today. There is so much drama in the world with people in the world and some that care for each other and like being around good people.
The reason i say the 2008 version was better is because, one is was in color the 1961 version was in black and white. Prior to that there was celebrities in the movie that i see in new movies today. One thing that was better in the 1961 version was the acting. They played the character's better than the one in 2008.(because of p. diddy)
Allot of drama happened in these movies, there was one scene when Ruth was pregnant and was thinking about getting an abortion. There was also drama when Lena gave Walter all the money to put in the bank and he gave it to his friend to invest in a liquor Company and the guy ran off with it. Every one was upset with him and was bring him down. There was a scene when Lena told Beneatha you shouldn't just love someone when their at their highest, it's when their at their lowest when they need your love the most. That quote to me meant allot, if people act like that today then maybe every one wont be mad at each other and stop killing one another. (We are one all ways as a racist and we need to stick together because anther people are watching us kill each other).
The theme of these movies are relevant in 2008 because love and drama is what the world is made of today. There is so much drama in the world with people in the world and some that care for each other and like being around good people.
Tuesday, April 1, 2008
bb home work
Reviewers Name ___ Richard Tyler ___ Writer’s Name ___Taurien Wiggins___ PEER
EDITING/REVISION WORKSHEET
FOR EXPOSITORY ENTRIESEntry Number __1___ Entry Title ___honesty___
EDITOR’S COMMENTS:
1. Statement explains the topic that the writer is going to discuss. YESWrite the topic here. ___why honesty is important___
2. Reason explains why the topic is important. YES
3. Example #1 shows why the statement and reason are correct. YES
4. Explanation #1 ties example #1 back to the statement and reason. YESHow? ___He said honesty is important because its a key in life___
5. Example #2 shows why the statement and reason are correct. YES
6. Explanation #2 ties example #2 back to the statement and reason. YES
How? ___He said For example, it's like if you don't tell the truth your not only hurting who your lien to but your also hurting yourself because nobody wouldn't no what to think of you anymore. ___
7. "What Difference Does it Make?" wraps up the entire entry byproviding a "big picture" view of why what writer said is important. YES
8. Writer uses vocabulary relevant to detective fiction. YES
9. I circled punctuation, mechanical, and structural errors. NO
10. I conferenced with the writer about his/her entry. YES
Return this form to the writer so that s/he can attach it to his/her rough drafts.WRITER’S COMMENTS:
1. The editor’s comments were helpful to me. YES
2. I understood what the editor wanted me to do. YES
3. I feel confident that I can make the necessary revisions. YES
4. At my next conference with the teacher, I need to discuss or ask about the following:
EDITING/REVISION WORKSHEET
FOR EXPOSITORY ENTRIESEntry Number __1___ Entry Title ___honesty___
EDITOR’S COMMENTS:
1. Statement explains the topic that the writer is going to discuss. YESWrite the topic here. ___why honesty is important___
2. Reason explains why the topic is important. YES
3. Example #1 shows why the statement and reason are correct. YES
4. Explanation #1 ties example #1 back to the statement and reason. YESHow? ___He said honesty is important because its a key in life___
5. Example #2 shows why the statement and reason are correct. YES
6. Explanation #2 ties example #2 back to the statement and reason. YES
How? ___He said For example, it's like if you don't tell the truth your not only hurting who your lien to but your also hurting yourself because nobody wouldn't no what to think of you anymore. ___
7. "What Difference Does it Make?" wraps up the entire entry byproviding a "big picture" view of why what writer said is important. YES
8. Writer uses vocabulary relevant to detective fiction. YES
9. I circled punctuation, mechanical, and structural errors. NO
10. I conferenced with the writer about his/her entry. YES
Return this form to the writer so that s/he can attach it to his/her rough drafts.WRITER’S COMMENTS:
1. The editor’s comments were helpful to me. YES
2. I understood what the editor wanted me to do. YES
3. I feel confident that I can make the necessary revisions. YES
4. At my next conference with the teacher, I need to discuss or ask about the following:
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