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Reviewers Name ___ Richard Tyler ___ Writer’s Name ___Taurien Wiggins___ PEER
EDITING/REVISION WORKSHEET
FOR EXPOSITORY ENTRIESEntry Number __1___ Entry Title ___honesty___
EDITOR’S COMMENTS:
1. Statement explains the topic that the writer is going to discuss. YESWrite the topic here. ___why honesty is important___
2. Reason explains why the topic is important. YES
3. Example #1 shows why the statement and reason are correct. YES
4. Explanation #1 ties example #1 back to the statement and reason. YESHow? ___He said honesty is important because its a key in life___
5. Example #2 shows why the statement and reason are correct. YES
6. Explanation #2 ties example #2 back to the statement and reason. YES
How? ___He said For example, it's like if you don't tell the truth your not only hurting who your lien to but your also hurting yourself because nobody wouldn't no what to think of you anymore. ___
7. "What Difference Does it Make?" wraps up the entire entry byproviding a "big picture" view of why what writer said is important. YES
8. Writer uses vocabulary relevant to detective fiction. YES
9. I circled punctuation, mechanical, and structural errors. NO
10. I conferenced with the writer about his/her entry. YES
Return this form to the writer so that s/he can attach it to his/her rough drafts.WRITER’S COMMENTS:
1. The editor’s comments were helpful to me. YES
2. I understood what the editor wanted me to do. YES
3. I feel confident that I can make the necessary revisions. YES
4. At my next conference with the teacher, I need to discuss or ask about the following: